tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3613502853688699327.post7869192459463085358..comments2023-04-10T05:59:13.771-05:00Comments on Fluid Idleness: UncookedCorinnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14581819225069644563noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3613502853688699327.post-42502944513900697492011-07-12T20:04:37.260-05:002011-07-12T20:04:37.260-05:00Great use of the word raw - so many shades of its ...Great use of the word raw - so many shades of its meaning throughout this piece.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3613502853688699327.post-63842244037685510392011-07-12T19:29:49.120-05:002011-07-12T19:29:49.120-05:00oh my how I do love this!
"alive now, raw, un...oh my how I do love this!<br />"alive now, raw, uncooked, potent"<br />....such a delicious line.<br />My heart got a bit giddy <br />as I read along.....felt my wings<br />flapping eagerly by my side:)<br />Wonderful share....thanks!<br />-JenniferJennifer Richardsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04305032927925322733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3613502853688699327.post-9312544498793865422011-07-12T12:47:09.324-05:002011-07-12T12:47:09.324-05:00love the progression of the lines...but also the s...love the progression of the lines...but also the story...being free of those secrets is huge...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com