"Be grateful for luck. Pay the thunder no mind - listen to the birds. And don't hate nobody." ~ Eubie Blake
nice
to hear
your laughter
and i'm grateful
to be able to hear heaven today
Thank you for introducing me to the geometry of tetractys. I enjoy the structure, the final line being the sum of the parts, as both a summary thought and a number of syllables. Nice work.
What a beautiful little poem!
ReplyDeletesmiles. laughter can be heaven...and i need a bit of it on a monday when my entire house is sick
ReplyDelete"...to be able to hear heaven today," will be my goal. Thank you for that lovely thought.
ReplyDeleteI'm loving the idea of laughter as heaven, sweet thought ...
ReplyDeleteLovely, Corinna. That would be a perfect moment.
ReplyDeleteHeaven is where we find it (when our eyes are open and we are looking).
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Terresa
Wonderful words that just brightened me up today. This put many sweet pictures in my mind.....
ReplyDeleteVery inspiring words - peaceful poem
ReplyDeleteThank you for introducing me to the geometry of tetractys. I enjoy the structure, the final line being the sum of the parts, as both a summary thought and a number of syllables. Nice work.
ReplyDeletequote and poem
ReplyDeletehave me grinning
happily:)
thanks, you!
-Jennifer