Sunday, June 5, 2011

Into a Squall

"Nothing but heaven itself is better than a friend who is really a friend." ~ Plautus

lighthearted you, with magic rains
choose life energy around pains
at times, lucky, with friends terrains
your laugh champagnes, your laugh champagnes

feel all laughter's exhalation
imagine good time's sparkle fun
spontaneous times adjust, stun
journeys outrun, journeys outrun

lighthearted, fun-loving air dust
many times played with magic trust
playful mind chooses to the rush
therefore combust, therefore combust

this feels of happy gifted times
places exhaled, imagined rhymes
remember the energy climbs
to the sublime, to the sublime

inside, as friends imagine all
playful and you, happy to fall
into a life that sings to crawl
into a squall, into a squall


  1. Beautiful tribute to friendship, Corinna.

  2. nice form and rhyme scheme...your verbiage seems at odds with the quote at times...dipping darker...outrun, combust, crawls, squall...i really like the closing stanza as even with the verbiage it rings positive...

  3. The last stanza is my favorite.

  4. love this!
    "your laugh champaignes"
    ...feeling this:)
    My trots alongside this
    and is energized!