Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Sacrificial Me

didn't hold a ceremony
for the sacrificial lonely
traded you for all t'was phony
as i began to die slowly

now my heart is barely beating
wish to resurrect a meeting
with yourself, however fleeting
life without you is defeating

left defenseless, always in doubt
you are the soul that i'm without
introverted, bashful and stout
you were what i was all about

now a ceremony i seek
while not assured of the technique
my blood i'll shed for your mystique
and on my knees i do weep


  1. you are the soul i am without...nice...sad, it all rings of loneliness and longing

  2. This is so sad...hope it's only writing and not what's stuck in your heart...either way hugs are on their way to you. xo

  3. Sad....yet very beautiful.
    I have felt this way- but thankfully not at present.
    Like how you put heart with your words......

  4. It would be nice to have some sort of ceremony, wouldn't it, one to mark the grief and sadness at a broken relationship.

  5. Hi...I'm a new fan of your blog. This post is heartbreaking but beautiful at the same time. Can't imagine if I'm actually there amongst your words...so sad.