Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Thoughts Cling

thoughts spin shimmering webs that cling
in the corners of muddled minds
they feed idea's other wing
survival of the fittest kinds

in the corners of muddled minds
carcasses of a gentler time
survival of the fittest kinds
flit about a nursery rhyme

carcasses of a gentler time
when colors twirled nimbly around
flit about a nursery rhyme
when survival trumps life's rebound

when colors twirled nimbly around
they feed ideas other wing
when survival trumps life's rebound
thoughts spin shimmering webs that cling

2 comments:

  1. A great echoing theme. "Carcasses of a gentler time" stands out. The web is both beautiful and dangerous.

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  2. nice...some great imagery and well played in form...the other wing is a great line too...

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