Monday, June 13, 2011

Wishing

where does the wishing get you?
stuck between two rocks
when do dreams come true?

only when you introduce something new
break away the safety locks
where does the wishing get you?

when am i allowed my due?
tired of following the flocks
when do dreams come true?

treasures i have but few
all i hear are the ticking of clocks
where does the wishing get you?

i'm just waiting on a clue
tired of building with blocks
when do dreams come true?

when will he come to woo?
and knock me off my socks?
where does the wishing get you?
when do dreams come true?

6 comments:

  1. Al of this is great- but my favorite has to be the first few lines....I think that's where I seem to be stuck most days. Love this one.
    I THINK dreams come true....it is hard knowing just when though......

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  2. sometimes they do, and i think that keeps us making them...

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  3. but the real question becomes when will it be my time...

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  4. I think the entire question comes down to your line, "only when you introduce something new," and not new as in a physical manifestation so much as in our thinking.

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  5. Dreams do come true...just don't ever give up on them. They need your attention to keep them alive. It's like watering a plant, it will wilt without our effort. Easy to say, I know...much harder to do : )

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  6. I wish I could write poetry like this .-)

    But seriously,I love the poems here on this blog.

    Cheers / Daz

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