Sunday, April 10, 2011

Win

hover, hover, that's all you do.
you inhale the ground and the glue
and i'm gone, not even with you
puffs of dirt chew, puffs of dirt chew

chew, chew, on my aura and pain
slurping up what, of me, remains
sucked out of me all that was gained
weary mundane, weary mundane

mundane, mundane, your games within
stronger, smarter than what has been
I Rise, Shatter your evil grin
I always win, I always win.

7 comments:

  1. THAT is one awesome fight and come back.

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  2. well done, I've tried this type of poetry and could never seem to make it work. I envy your ability to write in so many styles!

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  3. wow. wicked feel and the echoes are haunting...so would love to hear this one...

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  4. Definitely lots of determination in this verse, very assured.

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  5. Thanks! I needed that! Inner Strength, inner power. Resistance to anyone who would try to steal it.

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  6. Beautiful write, enjoyed it :)
    Take Care
    Marinela


    Short Poems

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