Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Uncooked

be present at this one moment
and feel what it’s like to just be
alive now, raw, uncooked, potent
bloody to look at, not easy

and feel what it’s like to just be
find again where your secrets hide
bloody to look at, not easy
put them under a tree and sigh

find again where your secrets hide
smile at the stranger that nods
put them under a tree and sigh
we are all in our best facades

smile at the stranger that nods
controlled behavior might freak out
we are all in our best facades
so what if I broke the devout

controlled behavior might freak out
defy courtesy and live free
so what if I broke the devout
illogical screamed in the street

defy courtesy and live free
would you please take my hand and run
illogical screamed in the street
run away with me and have fun

would you please take my hand and run
light a bonfire with secrets
run away with me and have fun
bind my secret shame and forget

light a bonfire with secrets
your secret shame, let go of it
bind my secret shame and forget
I hold you, we dance in a fit

your secret shame, let go of it
be present at this one moment
I hold you, we dance in a fit
alive now, raw, uncooked, potent

3 comments:

  1. love the progression of the lines...but also the story...being free of those secrets is huge...

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  2. oh my how I do love this!
    "alive now, raw, uncooked, potent"
    ....such a delicious line.
    My heart got a bit giddy
    as I read along.....felt my wings
    flapping eagerly by my side:)
    Wonderful share....thanks!
    -Jennifer

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  3. Great use of the word raw - so many shades of its meaning throughout this piece.

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